2.5: Trouble Spots in Language- Levels of Formality

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What Is Good College Writing?

Look at the following statements. Decide if each one is true or false.

1. When you go to college, you need to use long, complicated words in your writing. Using this kind of vocabulary will make you sound more intelligent.

TRUE / FALSE

2. You can use the same kind of language in college writing as you do in your everyday life.

TRUE / FALSE

Both statements are false. College writing does not require long, complicated words. You do not need to sound like a walking dictionary to write effective college assignments. Often, simple language is clearer and more effective. However, this does not mean that your college assignments can be written in the same style as your texts to your friends, or your Facebook status updates. There are some words and expressions that are best avoided in college writing.

You Try It!

The following sentences contain words or expressions that should be avoided in college writing. For each of the underlined words and expressions, find a better alternative. In some cases, the underlined word can simply be removed; no replacement is needed.

1. It is possible to grow lettuce, tomatoes, and other stuff on a balcony.

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2. Many people find a low-carb diet awesome for losing weight.

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3. The people of the town were pissed off when the farmers’ market closed.

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4. Don’t add too much salt, or you’ll totally ruin the flavour of the dish.

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5. It isn’t easy to eat well on a budget. Many people screw up when they first try it.

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6. It’s pretty shocking to see the number of additives in a microwaveable meal.

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7. A major reason for obesity is eating too much fast food.

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8. Basically, a healthy diet should contain more fresh foods and fewer processed foods.

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9. It’s important for kids to eat enough fruits and vegetables.

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10. Actually, many Canadians consume too much meat.

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