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6.20: Video: Evolution of the Thesis Statement

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    Previous pages established the importance of a working thesis statement early in the writing process. This working thesis is likely to be revisited and revised several times as the writing process continues.

    After gathering evidence, and before starting to write the essay itself, is a natural point to look again at the project’s thesis statement. The following video offers friendly, appealing advice for developing a thesis statement more concretely.

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