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27.8: Try It: Punctuation

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    Read the following introduction to an academic paper written by an undergraduate linguistics student. Has the punctuation in this passage been used effectively? Identify any errors, and comment where punctuation might be used to a better effect. The sentences have been numbered to aid you in your comments.

    Concert Poster for Rockabye Hamlet, showing a skull wearing a tye-dye bandana singing into a microphone(1) American culture today is filled with external references—every piece of media seems to be connected to at least three others in some way or another. (2) Its almost jarring to sit through a movie, that doesn’t make some type of reference to a preexisting work. (3) This kind of interplay between different works is called intertextuality a term coined in 1986 by Julia Kristeva. (4) This paper will look at the intertextuality present in the children’s movie Enchanted; specifically, it will examine the kind of references made and the reason behind those references.

    (5) Intertexuality in children’s movies is a little unique because these films must appeal to two vastly different audiences: young children and their parents. (6) While children are the primary target audience for these movies parents are the ones who will ultimately purchase the movie (or not). (7) Because of these two distinct audiences, intertextuality appears constantly in childrens’ media to create humor and to add interest for adults who may find themselves watching the same movie tens of times.

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    1. The dash is used correctly here. It is an eye-catching punctuation mark, which could help draw the reader in as well.
    2. The wrong its has been used here. The sentence should start with it’s (a contraction of it is). Additionally, the phrase “that doesn’t make some type of reference to a preexisting work” is necessary to the primary meaning of the sentence. Thus, the comma before the phrase should be removed.
    3. The phrase “a term coined in 1986 by Julia Kristeva” is not necessary for the sentence to make sense; it simply adds more detail. It should be set off with some type of punctuation marks: either parentheses or a comma.
      • This kind of interplay between different works is called intertextuality (a term coined in 1986 by Julia Kristeva).
      • This kind of interplay between different works is called intertextuality, a term coined in 1986 by Julia Kristeva.
    4. This punctuation in this sentence is correct. However, the ideas might be better represented if the sentence were split in two:
      • This paper will look at the intertextuality present in the children’s movie Enchanted. Specifically, it will examine the kind of references made and the reason behind those references.
    5. The colon is used correctly in this sentence. It separates a list from the complete idea preceding it.
    6. “While children are the primary target audience for these movies” needs a comma directly following it to separate it from the other complete idea in the sentence.
    7. Childrens’ has been turned into a possessive incorrectly. Even though the noun is plural, the plural (children) doesn’t end with an s, so the correct possessive form is children’s.

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    The speech below is given by Gwendolen in Oscar Wilde’s The Importance of Being Earnest (Act 1, Scene 1). Imagine you want to quote this speech in a paper, leaving out the bolded portions. How would you insert this quote into your paper? Be sure to correctly cite the quotation as well.

    Five actors in period dress on stage in a living room sceneJack? . . . No, there is very little music in the name Jack, if any at all, indeed. It does not thrill. It produces absolutely no vibrations . . . I have known several Jacks, and they all, without exception, were more than usually plain. Besides, Jack is a notorious domesticity for John! And I pity any woman who is married to a man called John. She would probably never be allowed to know the entrancing pleasure of a single moment’s solitude. The only really safe name is Ernest.

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    The Importance of Being Earnest, despite its title, is not actually about being honest or sincere. Instead, it is about the importance of having the name Earnest. The main character, Jack, has romanced a woman, all the while calling himself Earnest. Near the beginning of the play, he asks if she would mind if his name were Jack. She responds, “Jack? [. . .] No, there is very little music in the name Jack, if any at all, indeed. . . . Besides, Jack is a notorious domesticity for John! And I pity any woman who is married to a man called John. . . . The only really safe name is Ernest” (Wilde 1.1).

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