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37.2: Revision Workshop (Classroom Activity)

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    REMEMBER AND UNDERSTAND (15 minutes)

    Make a list of your key findings, arguments, and the value of using multiple argumentation methods for your social justice research essay. One way you could format your list is as follows: 

    1. Key Findings

      1. List Key Finding 1

      2. List Key Finding 2

      3. List Key Finding 3… and so on

    2. Arguments

      1. List Argument 1 

      2. List Argument 2

      3. List Argument 3

      4. List Argument 4… and so on

    3. Value of Using Multiple Argumentation Methods

      1. Rationale Point 1

      2. Rationale Point 2… and so on

     

    APPLY AND ANALYZE (15 minutes)

    Write a reflection that describes what you learned about the relationship between argumentation and advocacy.  

     

    CREATE (30 minutes)

    Concluding Section for the Social Justice Research Essay In-Class Assignment

    Write approximately 250 words (1 page double-spaced) that reiterate your key findings and arguments from each section. Then, restate why it is valuable to use multiple argumentation methods to address your social justice research topic. Also, explain what you learned about the relationship between argumentation and advocacy. Conclude the section with a call-to-action and the vision you want to see in the world around us if people follow what you are advocating for regarding your social justice research topic. 

    Note: It is likely easier to write your concluding section if you reference your key findings, arguments, and rationales from the REMEMBER AND UNDERSTAND activity as well as the relationship between argumentation and advocacy in the APPLY AND ANALYZE activity above. 

     

    EVALUATE (18 minutes) 

    Reverse Peer Feedback 5 In-Class Assignment

    Sometimes peer feedback exercises prioritize assessing how well a peer thinks you completed an assignment. However, with reverse peer feedback, you will be assessing how well your peer gave you feedback on your assignment submissions. 

    For this reverse peer feedback assignment, your peer should give constructive feedback on this assignment: 

    1. Concluding Section for the Social Justice Research Essay In-Class Assignment

    As the peer giving feedback, prioritize giving feedback the addresses the following: 

    1. How does the assignment submission address the social justice research topic?

    2. How well does the assignment submission address the assignment guidelines and/or argumentation method in focus?

    3. What constructive feedback do you have that is actionable, would support improvement, emphasizes strengths, and discusses opportunities for growth? 

    4. What specific examples from the assignment submission support your constructive feedback?

    5. How can you share constructive feedback in a way that is clearly written, well-organized, and respectful?

    As the scholar receiving reverse peer feedback, use the Reverse Peer Feedback Rubric to rate your peer’s constructive feedback. After that, you may also provide a brief comment that explains your ratings. That could be helpful to support both you and your peer’s peer review skills. 


    Note: You should keep the feedback from your peer because you will use it later during the revision workshop.

     

    Reverse Peer Feedback Rubric

    Criteria

    Unsatisfactory (0)

    Developing (1)

    Proficient (2)

    Exemplary (3)

    Attention to Social Justice Research Topic

    Feedback exhibits none of the following elements: 

    • Specificity about the submission’s connection to the topic
    • Depth of analyzing effectiveness of the submission’s connection to social justice
    • Suggestions to support more connections of the submission to the social justice topic

    Feedback exhibits one of the following elements: 

    • Specificity about the submission’s connection to the topic
    • Depth of analyzing effectiveness of the submission’s connection to social justice
    • Suggestions to support more connections of the submission to the social justice topic

    Feedback exhibits two of the following elements: 

    • Specificity about the submission’s connection to the topic
    • Depth of analyzing effectiveness of the submission’s connection to social justice
    • Suggestions to support more connections of the submission to the social justice topic

    Feedback exhibits three of the following elements: 

    • Specificity about the submission’s connection to the topic
    • Depth of analyzing effectiveness of the submission’s connection to social justice
    • Suggestions to support more connections of the submission to the social justice topic

    Alignment with Guidelines, Methods, and Strategies

    Feedback exhibits none of the following elements: 

    • Addresses the assignment guidelines
    • Addresses the argumentation method (e.g., components from the method)
    • Addresses specific criteria or steps (e.g., specific rhetorical strategies like narration, description, process, cause & effect, etc.)

    Feedback exhibits one of the following elements: 

    • Addresses the assignment guidelines
    • Addresses the argumentation method (e.g., components from the method)
    • Addresses specific criteria or steps (e.g., specific rhetorical strategies like narration, description, process, cause & effect, etc.)

    Feedback exhibits two of the following elements: 

    • Addresses the assignment guidelines
    • Addresses the argumentation method (e.g., components from the method)
    • Addresses specific criteria or steps (e.g., specific rhetorical strategies like narration, description, process, cause & effect, etc.)

    Feedback exhibits three of the following elements: 

    • Addresses the assignment guidelines
    • Addresses the argumentation method (e.g., components from the method)
    • Addresses specific criteria or steps (e.g., specific rhetorical strategies like narration, description, process, cause & effect, etc.)

    Actionable Constructive Feedback

    Feedback exhibits none of the following elements: 

    • Actionable suggestions
    • Strengths
    • Opportunities for growth

    Feedback exhibits one of the following elements: 

    • Actionable suggestions
    • Strengths
    • Opportunities for growth

    Feedback exhibits two of the following elements: 

    • Actionable suggestions
    • Strengths
    • Opportunities for growth

    Feedback exhibits three of the following elements: 

    • Actionable suggestions
    • Strengths
    • Opportunities for growth

    Apt Specificity, Quantity, and Relevance

    Feedback exhibits none of the following elements: 

    • Specific examples from the submission referenced
    • Multiple examples from the submission referenced
    • Relevant examples from the submission referenced

    Feedback exhibits one of the following elements: 

    • Specific examples from the submission referenced
    • Multiple examples from the submission referenced
    • Relevant examples from the submission referenced

    Feedback exhibits two of the following elements: 

    • Specific examples from the submission referenced
    • Multiple examples from the submission referenced
    • Relevant examples from the submission referenced

    Feedback exhibits three of the following elements: 

    • Specific examples from the submission referenced
    • Multiple examples from the submission referenced
    • Relevant examples from the submission referenced

    Attunement to Clarity, Organization, and Respect

    Feedback exhibits none of the following elements:

    • Clarity 
    • Organization 
    • Respect

    Feedback exhibits one of the following elements:

    • Clarity 
    • Organization 
    • Respect

    Feedback exhibits two of the following elements:

    • Clarity 
    • Organization 
    • Respect

    Feedback exhibits three of the following elements:

    • Clarity 
    • Organization 
    • Respect

    Optional:

    Brief Comment

     

     


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