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2.4: The Importance of Verbs

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    Much of the style advice given so far revolves around the importance of verbs. Think of your sentence as a machine, and the verb as the engine that makes the machine work. Like machines, sentences can function efficiently or inefficiently, and the use of a strong verb is one way to make them work effectively. Also like machines, sentences can be simple or complex. Here are some key principles regarding the effective use of verbs in your sentences. While effective sentences may occasionally deviate from these principles, try to follow them as often as possible:

    • Keep the subject and the verb close together; avoid separating them with words or phrases that could create confusion
    • Place the verb near the beginning of the sentence (and close to the subject)
    • Maintain a high verb/word ratio in your sentence
    • Prefer active verb constructions over passive ones
    • Avoid “to be” verbs (am, is, are, was, were, being, been, be) whenever possible
    • Try to turn nominalizations (abstract nouns) back into verbs.

    Use the verb strength chart in Table 2.4.1 as a guide to “elevate” weaker verbs (or words with implied action) in a sentence to stronger forms.

    TABLE 2.4.1 Verb strength chart
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    Verb Forms Verb Strength Examples
    Command/Imperative

    STRONG

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    WEAK

    Maintain the machine properly!

    Write the report!

    Active Indicative*

    (Subject performs the action of the verb)

    He maintains the machine regularly.

    She writes reports frequently.

    Active conditional

    She would maintain the machine if he would let her.

    He would write reports if he had more training.

    Gerunds ( verb -ing)

    Infinitives (to verb)

    (these do not function as verbs in your sentence; actual verbs are highlighted in yellow)

    While maintaining the machine, he gets quite dirty.

    Report writingtakes skill.

    It takes a lot of time to maintain this machine.

    To write effectively, one must get a sense of the audience.

    Passive

    (Subject receives the action of the verb)

    Passive Conditional

    Expressing a state of being (is, seems, appears)

    The machine is maintained by him.

    It would be maintained by her if…

    The report was written by her.

    Reports would be written by him if…

    The report seems fine.

    Nominalizations (verbs turned into abstract nouns)

    Participles (nouns or adjectives that used to be verbs)

    Machine maintenanceis dirty work.

    A well-maintained machine is a thing of beauty.

    Written work must be free of errors.

    While you are not likely to use the command form very often, unless you are writing instructions, the second strongest form, Active Indicative, is the one you want to use most often (say, in about 80% of your sentences). In the indicative form, the subject carries out the action of the verb. This makes the sentence more direct, and often more concise.

    Part of the skill of using active verbs lies in choosing the verbs that precisely describes the action you want to convey. English speakers have become somewhat lazy in choosing a small selection of verbs most of the time (tobe, to do, to get, to make, to have, to put); as a result, these often-used verbs have come to have so many possible meanings that they are almost meaningless. Try looking up “make” or “have” in the dictionary; you will see pages and pages of possible meanings! Whenever possible, replace these bland verbs with more precise, descriptive verbs, as indicated in Table 2.4.2. Note that commonly used “signal verbs,” or verbs used to signal a quotation or paraphrase of someone else’s ideas, can also be more precise and descriptive. Saying “she writes” does not really indicate the purpose for the writing, whereas saying “she claims” suggests she is making an argument, and “she describes” makes her rhetorical purpose more evident.

    TABLE 2.4.2 Bland vs. descriptive verbs
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    Bland Verbs Descriptive Verbs

    Signal Verbs:

    Says
    States
    Talks about
    Discusses
    Writes

    Describe the rhetorical purpose behind what the author/speaker “says”:

    Explains, clarifies
    Describes, illustrates
    Claims, argues, maintains
    Asserts, stresses, emphasizes
    Recommends, urges, suggests

    Is, are, was, were being been

    Is verb-ing

    Instead of indicating what or how something “is,” describe what it DOES, by choosing a precise, active verb.

    Replace progressive form (is ___ing) with indicative form

    She is describingShe describes

    Get, gets

    Usually too colloquial (or passive); instead you could use more specific verbs such as

    Become, acquire, obtain, receive, prepare, achieve, earn, contract, catch, understand, appreciate, etc.

    Do, does

    Avoid using the emphatic tense in formal writing:

    It does work → it works.

    I do crack when I see apostrophe errors → I crack when I see apostrophe errors.

    Instead: Perform, prepare, complete, etc.

    Has, have

    Has to, have to

    This verb has many potential meanings! Try to find a more specific verb that “have/has” or “has to”:
    • She owns a car
    • They consume/eat a meal
    • The product includes many optional features
    • The process entails several steps

    Instead of “have to” try: Must, require, need, etc.

    Make

    Build, construct, erect, devise, create, design, manufacture, produce, prepare, earn, etc.

    Make a recommendation → recommend
    Make a promise → promise
    Make a plan → plan

    For more detailed information on using signal verbs when introducing quotations, see Appendix C: Integrating Source Evidence into Your Writing.

    Exercise \(\PageIndex{1}\): Improve the following sentences by elevating the verb and cutting clutter

    1. Market share is being lost by the company, as is shown in the graph in Figure 3.
    2. A description of the product is given by the author.
    3. An investigation of the issue has been conducted by her.
    4. His task is regional database systems troubleshooting handbook preparation.
    5. While a recommendationhas been made by the committee, an agreement to increase the budget will have to be approved by the committee.

    Exercise \(\PageIndex{1}\): Revision practice

    The following paragraph on The Effects of Energy Drinks does not conform to the 7Cs and contains far too many “to be” verbs. Revise this paragraph so that it has a clear topic sentence, coherent transitions, correct syntax, and concise phrasing. In particular, try to eliminate all “to be” verbs (am, is, are, was, were, being, been, be), and rephrase using strong, descriptive, active verbs. The first 7 “to be” verbs are highlighted for you. Try to cut the word count (260 words) in half.

    Energy Drinks are able to be consumed in many varied and different ways by people all over the world. Moreover, drinking these energy drinks is able to provide people in today’s society with the helpful benefits of increased awareness and energy. Besides, even though there are enhancements that may be present from drinking an energy drink, the negative side effects are posing more of a threat to a person than the energy boost that is able to be achieved. In a survey that was taken in the United States at an American university, it was reported that fifty one percent of participants were consuming greater than three energy drinks each month in the semester [1]. Looking at this statistic, it can be seen that a majority of students in university are drinking energy a large amount of drinks on a very regular basis. Which can be the cause of some health problems experienced by students. In the same study, it was also shown that energy drinks are capable of helping to increase energy and athletic endurance; for those who drank it. Despite the fact that there are some benefits to be had from drinking energy drinks, there is the problem of the negative side affects that are caused by the drinking of these energy drinks. However, the side affects that were commonly reported in the study are: headaches, and “energy crashes” (Smith 5). Being a potentially more severe problem than the minor problems of headaches and “crashes;” there is definitely the possibility of people which are becoming addicted to caffeine.

    Here is the exercise in a Word document for you to download and revise:

    Revision Exercise – Energy Drinks (.docx)

    After trying the exercise, click on the link below to compare your revision to effective revisions of this passage done by other students:

    Sample Revisions of Exercise 2.7 (.docx)

    Table 2.4.3 sums up many key characteristics of effective professional style that you should try to avoid (poor style) and implement (effective style) while writing technical documents.

    TABLE 2.4.3 Key characteristics of effective professional style
    Poor Style Effective Style
    Low VERB/WORD ratio per sentence High VERB/WORD ratio per sentence
    Excessive ‘is/are’ verbs Concrete, descriptive verbs
    Excessive passive verb constructions Active verb constructions
    Abstract or vague nouns Concrete and specific nouns
    Many prepositional phrases Few prepositional phrases
    Subject and verb are separated by words or phrases Subject and verb are close together
    Verb is near the end of the sentence Verb is near the beginning of the sentence
    Main idea (subject-verb relationship) is difficult to find Main idea is clear
    Sentence must be read more than once to understand it Meaning is clear the first time you read it
    Long, rambling sentences Precise, specific sentences

    This page titled 2.4: The Importance of Verbs is shared under a not declared license and was authored, remixed, and/or curated by Suzan Last (BCcampus) .

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