15.5: Writing Process- Thinking Critically About How People and Language Interact

Learning Objectives

By the end of this section, you will be able to:

• Identify and implement genre conventions of case studies for structure, paragraphing, voice, and mechanics.
• Articulate how genre conventions are shaped by purpose, culture, and expectation.
• Participate successfully in the collaborative and social aspects of writing processes.
• Give and act on productive feedback to works in progress.

Having learned about case studies and how they help advance research and knowledge, you are ready to do an informal one of your own. You will conduct an informal case study profile by selecting a topic to research, observing a setting and a participant (or participants), and using specified research methods. If applicable, see The Research Process: How to Create Sources for more information about selecting a research topic. You will then analyze the results of your study to determine its significance.

As indicated in Tracing a Broad Issue in the Individual, many universities and professional organizations will provide guidance on how to adhere to ethical standards when conducting a case study. Your instructor will be your best resource for answers to questions you have about your college’s policies on conducting research and whether and how they apply to the research you intend to do. Remember, however, that for any research you do involving human subjects, you must obtain participants’ written permission to be included in your study.

Summary of Assingment

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Conduct an informal case study of a classmate, friend, or family member to gain insight into the participant’s use of language, specifically the ways in which their culture(s) and language(s) interact. Try to find a willing participant who is either bilingual or fluent in, familiar with, or an occasional user of a language other than English. You can focus your case study on the ways in which your participant changes their language according to context, how their use of language is different when they interact with family and friends as opposed to in academic or professional contexts, or how using one language affects the other. Be sure to consult your instructor about the school’s policy on student participation in studies, and obtain written permission from the participant before you begin. If you do not know anyone who speaks another language, consider these topics:

• Body language that accompanies linguistic communication
• Language shifts according to medium (text, phone call, email, in person)
• In-person vs. written communication
• Comparison of language use between two participants from different cultures or age groups

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After you decide on your topic, formulate a research question that asks precisely what you want to learn from your study. Next, you will need to plan your case study by drafting questions for interviews and conducting observations at determined times and places. Then, using the information you collect from your interviews and observations, you will offer an interpretation about the participant’s use of language that might be helpful to your college’s instructors and administrators. Present your findings in a report of around 1,000 to 1,200 words.

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Another Lens. Complete the same case study, and share your findings in a presentation that is 7 to 10 minutes in length. See Scripting for the Public Forum: Writing to Speak for more information about scripting for a public forum. For this version of the assignment, record your interviews on video or use a voice recorder. Play clips of your interviews in your presentation to illustrate the participant’s use of language. Organize the presentation into clear, distinct sections with subtitles. Instead of long, dense paragraphs, use short bullet points to state your main points. Use visuals to communicate abstract ideas or data. Make sure your presentation flows logically and that you use appropriate transitions to maintain coherence. To indicate clear demarcations between sections, use headings and subheadings, as in the Annotated Sample Reading. In your presentation, include all of the typical sections of a written case study:

• Background/Context. Give an overview of previous research on the topic.
• Methods. Provide a detailed description of the methods you used to collect the data. Include a description of the participant and the observation environment.
• Results. Provide the data collected: answers to interview or survey questions, your observations, and any other pertinent information.
• Analysis. Interpret the data, and discuss any limitations of the case study.

See the resources below for some helpful presenting tips.

• 6 Tips to Calm Your Nerves before Speaking (https://openstax.org/r/6tips)
• Like, Eliminate Ums and Ahs, Right? (https://openstax.org/r/eliminateums)
• Do You Write the Way You Speak? (You Should!) (https://openstax.org/r/doyouwritetheway)
• Do You Write the Way You Speak? (You Should!) Part 2 (https://openstax.org/r/doyouwritetheway2)

Quick Launch: Research Question and Data Collection

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Within your selected topic, begin to brainstorm possible research questions, keeping in mind the following characteristics:

• Open Ended. A good research question has multiple possible answers, all equally plausible. Avoid a yes-or-no question or one with an obvious answer.
• Debatable. The research question should spark reasonable debate around the best answer or solution. If you think you know the answer to the research question or if you doubt that people can be open-minded about a range of answers, it is not a good research question.
• Answerable. You should be able to answer your research question by using the evidence you gather. You should be able to consult existing source material on the topic.
• Consequential. The outcome of the debate around your research question should be of consequence. In other words, what you or others choose to do going forward should matter and affect others.

You probably will revise the wording of your research question quite a bit before it aligns with the characteristics listed. Spend time thinking about your research question, and revise it as necessary to prepare to conduct your case study. See Table \(15.1\) for examples of how to revise research questions in various fields of study.

Table \(15.1\) Revising research questions

Research Questions
Topic	Research question doesn’t meet basic requirements. It is a yes-or-no question, of little consequence, easy to answer, or suggestive of the “right” answer.	Research question is of some consequence and could have multiple answers but needs further revision to be open-ended, more specific, or more consequential.	Research question is specific, open-ended, consequential, and suitable for a case study.
Sports	Who are the best college athletes now? Should college athletes be paid?	Is it fair to other students to pay college athletes?	How do colleges benefit—or not—from paying student athletes? How do college athletes benefit—or not—from being paid?
Finance	Should you invest in stocks or bonds? Should the government regulate the economy? What was the GDP in the year 2016?	What are some things the U.S. government does to protect the economy?	How are individuals affected by government intervention in free-market economies?
Technology	Are high-quality cell phones too expensive? Is Apple a monopoly?	What will be the future of landlines?	Why do some people continue to use landlines? How do people combine cell phone and landline use?

Once you select a topic and research question, you can begin looking for background information.

Data Collection

Before starting your actual research, get a sense of the body of knowledge around your topic. Remember, case studies are about advancing research in a particular field. For a case study to effectively advance knowledge, it must show awareness of the research already done in the field. A literature review section, which includes previous research and background about the topic, is typically included in a case study. Browsing trade publications and academic journals can help you get a sense of existing research. Looking for articles frequently referred to in other articles is a good way to locate important research, as researchers typically cite significant studies. Look at important, groundbreaking research in addition to recently published work. The information you gather from existing literature may be either qualitative or quantitative. See The Research Process: Where to Look for Existing Sources for more information about conducting research.

Drafting:

After you have established your research question, you can begin your actual study. Start by planning how you will collect your primary source data. First, review the literature in the field if you have not yet done so. Next, draft questions to ask your case study participant. The strongest case studies provide a unique perspective that is applicable to your specific audience—in this case, students, teachers, and administrators at your college. Keep in mind that not every college is the same. Some colleges, such as “open admissions” community colleges, admit all who apply, whereas other colleges accept only 5 percent or fewer of their applicants. Interview questions are likely to be different depending on the individual characteristics of your college. To learn more about your college and its student population, search for information on the college website. Look for sections that have titles such as “About Us,” “About Our Students,” “College Facts” / “Factbook,” and so on.

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Brainstorm a list of characteristics that make your college and its students unique. Figure \(15.6\) shows how a student at Midlands Technical College began data collection for a case study on language use.

Figure \(15.6\) Brainstorming data (CC BY 4.0; Rice University & OpenStax)

Create Interview Questions

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Using your research and brainstorming ideas, draft a series of 10 to 15 questions you plan to ask your case study participant. Remember that these questions should be open-ended (no yes-or-no questions) and give the participant an opportunity to speak freely and extemporaneously. There are no right or wrong answers. With these questions, keep your purpose in mind: to gather information that will be helpful to students, teachers, and administrators about how a student at Midlands (or another school) uses language. Here are some sample questions:

• What are your hobbies, or what do you do for entertainment? (This question should elicit responses that provide insight into the student’s leisure activities and the groups they identify with.)
• What new language uses did you have to develop when you became a college student?
• If you have a job in addition to being a student, what are some ways you use language to do that job?
• How do you communicate with friends and family? (Text messages? Apps such as Snapchat? Phone calls?)
• Describe your style of text messaging. (Probe for details about situations and contexts.)
  • When do you send long texts?
  • How long do you usually wait for a response before sending a new message?
  • How long do you usually wait before responding to a message?
  • When do you use standard English?
  • When and for what purposes do you use emoji?
• How do you communicate using voice or video chat (Zoom, video games, iMessage, etc.)? • With whom do you communicate, and in what contexts?
• How do you adjust your use of language in these situations?

Remember to use the brainstorming and research you did previously to draft appropriate questions for your case study participant. Also, try to find ways to encourage the participant to provide as many details as they can and to identify an appropriate setting in which you can observe them using language.

Interview the person you have chosen to study. Record their responses on paper or on a digital voice recorder. If using a digital recorder, briefly note anything you want to review later in writing. If you find an opportunity to elicit further information or follow up, do so. You may find it helpful to print the bulleted list of questions and write the participant’s answers directly on the page.

Field Observation

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The next step is to observe. If you haven’t already done so, decide on a setting in which to observe the participant. You might observe in person and/or use a messaging app or video chat to observe them using language at work, with their friends and family, or in some other setting. The setting should be one in which you can get a good idea of how the participant uses language naturally in that context. For example, you would not want to observe a student playing a video game if they aren’t a gamer. Here are some suggestions about what to note as you observe. Be sure to take detailed notes during your observation. Consider printing this page as well and writing observation notes on it. See The Research Process: How to Create Sources to learn more about field research.

• What are some common words or phrases used?
• In what ways does the participant replace or substitute certain words with emoji, slang, acronyms, and the like?
• When does the participant’s voice indicate shifts in volume, tone, or vocabulary? If you are observing texts or writing, how does the participant communicate tone?
• What specific words and phrases does the participant use? That is, what words and phrases might not be understood by you or others but are understood by the participant and the people with whom they are communicating?

Analysis of Data

After collecting data, analyze your findings and write your report. First, look closely at the data you have collected, and decide what the information is telling you about how the participant uses language. You should have data gathered from both qualitative and quantitative research. If you need more of either one, interview or observe the participant again, or conduct more background research. Practice identifying qualitative and quantitative data.

Writing the Introduction: Background, Context, and Methods

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In the introduction, provide background and context for the case study. To begin, write a detailed description of the study you have conducted and what you sought to learn from it. Also include the details of your literature review and the methods you used to collect data (interviews, observations, and so on). The example below is an introduction to the Midlands Technical College student’s case study on how students use language:

Background and Context

Midlands Technical College is a two-year public college in Columbia, South Carolina. Over the course of two weeks, I observed two students to better understand their uses of language. A generational shift in the average college student population is occurring, with millennials graduating and making up less of the college student population. At the same time, Gen Z’s numbers on college campuses continue to grow. Studying how college students use language can provide valuable insights into how to communicate effectively with this population.

Methods and Participant

I gathered my data using three methods. In the first method, I researched literature about both Midlands Technical College’s student population and communication habits and attitudes among Gen Z students, and I looked into some case studies about the use of emoji. For the second method, I created a group chat consisting of me and two students enrolled in the same section of an introductory psychology course. We used this group chat to discuss the course, assignments, due dates, etc. For the third method, I created a survey of 10 questions asking the students to think about and reflect on how they use language at home versus at school. I then interviewed the students to record their answers. Using this data, I was able to analyze how students use language among their peers versus how they use language around their family.

Body: Presentation of Data

The next step in writing your case study is to present your data and analysis. How you set up your body paragraphs is up to you or your instructor. Like the sample study about Leborgne, most case studies are organized into sections and subsections, each devoted to an aspect of the study. You have already written an introduction in which you presented the scope of your study, the participant, the field of research, and other pertinent background information. Now you can continue by organizing each element that you studied into its own section, or you can choose another way of setting it up. For example, your overall structure might look like the structure in Table \(15.2\), using your own criteria and as many sections as you need. If you choose another structure, create a similar organizer to help you keep focused as you write.

Table \(15.2\) Organizational structure

Criterion 1 Possible Criterion: Telephone Greetings	Qualitative Research Data Quantitative Research Data Additional Information Analysis
Criterion 2 Possible Criterion: Emoji	Qualitative Research Data Quantitative Research Data Additional Information Analysis
Criterion 3	Qualitative Research Data Quantitative Research Data Additional Information Analysis
Criterion 4	Qualitative Research Data Quantitative Research Data Additional Information Analysis
Criterion 5	Qualitative Research Data Quantitative Research Data Additional Information Analysis
Criterion 6	Qualitative Research Data Quantitative Research Data Additional Information Analysis

Provide detailed descriptions of what you observed and the results of your research. Include qualitative data based on your observations as well as quantitative data based on measurable results. Be sure to acknowledge what you do not know or were unable to observe. The following example illustrates a typical body paragraph describing a student’s use of capitalization and punctuation in text messages.

Mateo’s use of capitalization and punctuation appeared to change depending on the mood he wanted to convey. For example, “what time do u think prof chang will let us go today”—a casual message about class on Tuesday—lacked capitalization and punctuation (“What time do you think Prof. Chang will let us go today?”). On Thursday, Mateo sent a more formal message regarding the need for the group to study for an upcoming exam: “Guys, we need to settle on a time and place—Oscar’s or Dawson Library—to study.” It’s not clear whether Mateo’s use of capitalization and punctuation is connected to his social group or other factors, as I had limited ability to observe the use of capitalization and punctuation by the study participants. However, this question is worth exploring in more detail.

Using Visuals

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One way in which an oral presentation of a case study will differ from a written case study is the number of visuals provided. Presenters are expected to use visuals when sharing data and illustrating points. However, writers also use visuals to help communicate abstract ideas. In addition to images, four main types of graphics are used to present data:

• Bar Charts. These charts typically use vertical bars to compare different data points. They are used primarily to compare similar groups to one another.

Figure \(15.7\) Bar chart (CC BY 4.0; Rice University & OpenStax)

• Line Graphs. These graphs typically use one or more lines to show how a data point (or points) has changed over time. Line graphs are often used to show trends over a given period.

Figure \(15.8\) Line graph (CC BY 4.0; Rice University & OpenStax)

• Pie Charts. These charts typically divide a circle (or “pie”) that represents a group into sections that express a percentage of the whole. They are used to show relationships and proportions of these parts.

Figure \(15.9\) Pie chart (CC BY 4.0; Rice University & OpenStax)

• Tables. Tables typically break down a set of specific data points that are hard to manage in words or charts. They present data in a linear way to help people locate a specific data point easily.

Figure \(15.10\) (CC BY 4.0; Rice University & OpenStax)

When selecting visuals, ensure that they are clear and related to the topic. A visual’s purpose is to illustrate a point that is too long or complex to express in words. Visuals should have a clear purpose and be clearly labeled. Your audience should be able to interpret and see the point of the visual without explanation. Include visuals to support your work, not simply because you are expected to include them.

Conclusion: What It All Means

Once you collect all your data, analyze it further and collectively to form your conclusions. Take a close look again at your interview responses and observation notes. What did the participant say in the interview that led to insights about their use of language? Try to identify any words or phrases that tell you something about the participants. See Analytical Report: Writing from Facts for more information about analyzing data. How does the data from your interviews and observations reveal something that might lead to a generalization about how students use language?

Arriving at conclusions can be tricky. Base your conclusion on observations of consistent behavior rather than reaching a broad conclusion based on limited evidence. Your conclusion should be something you notice that challenges your previous understanding or assumptions. For example, younger people appear to avoid the “laughing with crying eyes” emoji because it has been so overused that it now seems insincere. Young people are often the driving force behind new uses of language. To replace the “insincere” laughing-with-crying-eyes emoji, many young people turned to the skull emoji to indicate “I’m dead” (from laughing).

Your conclusion should present your theories. Based on the evidence you gathered, what are some generalizations you can make about how students use language? What did you observe that provides opportunity for further study? The example conclusion from a case study on emoji below presents a theory on how students use them.

Overall, I observed that students tend to be more informal when communicating to other students in the same age group. These students used emoji to communicate thoughts and feelings that differed from the more literal and more widely understood meaning of the emoji. I believe that students of this generation want to use language in a way that separates them from their older siblings, parents, and teachers. Thus, their use of emoji reflects that desire as they seek to change the meanings of some emoji. Whether this trend continues as students age is up for debate and presents an opportunity to further understanding of language use within this group.

Peer Review: Conferencing Electronically

After you finish your draft, receiving feedback from a peer will help you identify the strengths and weaknesses in your case study. Writers sometimes find it hard to view their work from the perspective of their audience. Therefore, peer feedback will help you focus on your writing in ways that are not obvious to you. Similarly, when you review your peer’s work, react to their draft as a serious and conscientious reader. What suggestions can you offer to make this case study more informative or something you would want to read?

Technology has facilitated giving and receiving feedback. You are probably familiar with getting feedback during in-class peer reviews and conferences, but if you haven’t done so already, consider electronic peer reviews. Conferencing electronically offers several advantages:

• Convenience. You don’t have to be in the same room with your conferencing partner to give each other feedback. Within a reasonable time frame, you can review your partner’s writing at a time that is convenient for you.
• Time. You have more time to think about your reactions to, and your feedback on, your conferencing partner’s writing than you would in person.
• Permanence. The feedback you give and receive is stored digitally and easy to access.
• Shareability. Electronic feedback is easier to reproduce and share with others, such as an instructor or a tutor.

Multiple technologies exist to help you conference electronically.

• Cloud Storage. Cloud storage providers such as Microsoft’s OneDrive and Google Drive store files on the Internet. You can access these sites from any device. Sharing, too, is easier because changes to the document are saved automatically. Therefore, every time you or someone else accesses the document, they are viewing the latest version.
• Word Processors. Microsoft Word and Google Docs have review features such as comment boxes and Track Changes as well as the capacity to suggest, accept, and reject changes.
• Collaboration Platforms. Slack, Google Hangouts, Zoom, and Microsoft Teams allow you to create a space where you can communicate with people in a shared online workspace. Features of collaboration platforms include file sharing and storage, chat, video conferencing, and task organizing.

When you are assigned a partner, open their draft and begin reviewing it. The following tutorial will explain how to use the review features of Microsoft Word. Other Microsoft Office and non-Office products (Google Docs and Apple’s Pages) offer similar commenting and markup features.

1. Open the document you want to review, and click the Review tab above the tools ribbon.
2. Read the draft as you normally would, looking for areas to comment on. Note the places where you can provide positive comments as well as possible places for revision.
3. To add a comment, highlight the word, sentence, or phrase to which you want to add a comment.
4. Click New Comment in the tools ribbon to create a comment box in the margin.
5. Type your comment in the box.
6. Click anywhere outside the box to save the comment.
7. To delete a comment, click inside the comment box, and then click Delete next to or beneath New Comment in the tools ribbon.

Specific Comments

Provide specific comments when reviewing your peer’s draft. Vague, general comments such as “revise this” don’t explain the reason for revision or how to revise. When conferencing electronically, specificity is even more important because what you write might be the only feedback your peer receives, unless you conference over video chat.

Comments can generally be categorized as vague, somewhat helpful, and specific and clear.

• Vague comments might offer praise that doesn’t point to anything specific about the writing, or they might offer criticism without providing a suggested revision or explaining why something should be revised. For example, a comment such as “Revise this sentence” is not helpful. Although it specifically identifies the sentence as needing revision, it doesn’t indicate why or suggest how to revise.
• Somewhat helpful comments are still general, but they comment on something specific about the writing. They may also suggest some direction for a revision. For example, a comment such as “Revise this question so that it’s more debatable” identifies the aspect that needs revision and briefly explains why. However, it does not provide further details about why the question is not debatable or how to revise it.
• Specific and clear comments identify precisely why the writing is good or needs revision. They also suggest a specific revision or revision strategy the writer can use. For example, “I think this question could be more debatable. ‘Do college students struggle with time management skills?’ is a yes-or-no question and would not lead to a strong argument either way. A better question could be ‘How does lack of time management skills affect college students as a whole?’ or ‘What should be done about students’ lack of time management skills?’”

Revising: Accepting and Rejecting Suggestions

After your partner finishes reviewing your draft, you will need to accept or reject their suggested changes. Use the image below to locate the tools in Word you will need to use. You can accept or reject edits to the wording, edits to the formatting, and comments in the margins.

Figure \(15.11\) Microsoft Word Review ribbon (CC BY 4.0; Rice University & OpenStax)

Edits made directly to your document will appear in red (for added text) or red text with a strikethrough (for deleted text).

1. To accept or reject changes in a Word document, open the document and click the Review tab above the tools ribbon.
2. To ensure that changes you make to the document will not be saved as edits, go to the tools ribbon, and toggle Track Changes to off.
3. To open a panel that displays all changes, click Reviewing or Reviewing Pane in the tools ribbon.
4. To navigate to a specific revision, click the revision in this panel.
5. To navigate consecutively through changes, click the Previous and Next buttons beside the Accept and Reject options in the tools ribbon.
6. To accept a revision, click Accept in the tools ribbon
7. To reject a revision, click Reject in the tools ribbon.
8. The arrows below or beside the Accept and Reject buttons open drop-down menus that give you the option either to accept or reject a change and then move to the next revision or to accept or reject all changes at once. Be careful not to accept or reject all changes without addressing each one individually.
9. When you finish, be sure you have accepted or rejected all of the edits and deleted all comments so that they don’t appear in the final draft.
10. Check that no red text remains in the paper and that no comments remain in the right margin.
11. When you are finished, be sure to save your changes.

Sharing Your Work

Seek out a student conference or publication to present your case study. Many colleges host events and conferences to showcase student work. Your teacher or advisor can probably direct you toward opportunities to present your work at your college or in the community.

For example, the University of Central Oklahoma hosts the annual Language and Linguistics Student Conference (https://openstax.org/r/languageandlinguistic), which is open to all undergraduate and graduate students. Presenting at a student conference is a great opportunity not only to share your work but also to network and gain experience that will make you stand out when applying to other schools, for scholarships, and for jobs.

In addition, a number of academic journals publish student research. For instance, Spectrum (https://openstax.org/r/spectrum), sponsored by the University of Alberta, is a student-run interdisciplinary journal that showcases students’ work. See more undergraduate publishing opportunities provided by the Council on Undergraduate Research (https://openstax.org/r/ugjournalslisting).

If you publish or present your case study, remember to adhere to ethical standards. As explained in Tracing a Broad Issue in the Individual, many universities and professional organizations will provide guidance on what standards to follow when conducting a case study. Be sure to review these guidelines with the organization sponsoring the conference or publication.

Another option for sharing is to gather the case studies done by all class members and, with the approval of your instructor, go through them to ascertain what, if any, trends emerge. If you and your classmates think these studies might be useful to college administrators, consider sending them, along with a detailed cover letter, to the Office of Admissions, the Dean of Students, or another appropriate administrative office.